Dylan Brown

Rookie (february 12 1993 / greely)

So Cold - Poem by Dylan Brown

I feel as if alone in the empty dark,
No one here for me, except for death.
pain is here and left its mark.

Was he the one causing pain
With his stupid dreaming?
How could he know his loves light
Would change his life forever?

Always afraid
Of the things he's feeling

These days go on there course inside a shrowd
its thick and suffocating

How can you say im me,
If we will never be?
search my thoughts, love of old?
how come its got so cold?


Comments about So Cold by Dylan Brown

  • Make A Wish (10/6/2008 9:43:00 PM)

    nice useage of words, wuite porfound and deep... i like it (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 6, 2008



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