Wednesday, February 28, 2018

So Death Comes Comments

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Death Comes
Death comes in the shape of a maiden
To take me to eternal abode in tresses
Oh life offer me the wine in eternal tin
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Seamus O Brian 28 February 2018

Who can resist a poem with a first line like that? Death comes in the shape of a maiden! I wondered where you would go from there, but you chose a line of thought that would not ruffle the maiden hearts of PH too much.

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Thanks Seamus O Brian

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

A highly imaginative poem nicely and touchingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks Kumarmani

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Thanks Sir Kumarmani

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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