So I'Ll Admit Poem by Carike Klokow

So I'Ll Admit

Rating: 5.0


Wow is all I have to say
you've stolen my thoughts
taken my breath away
I have opened up to you
fallen hard
don’t have a clue
You have got this hold on me
your face is my view
its all I see

Don’t know what to do
yes..i have fallen for you
Head over heels, so hard
Losing my mind, the bit that’s left
The little bit that hasn’t fallen apart
Cant control my thoughts no more
I sit and sigh and think aloud
The bits that hurt, that is now sore
Is the fact that I mite be to proud

To look at you and to admit
That I just don’t know what to do
Theres only one thing left, to submit
to the thought that I maybe do love u!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 02 September 2008

Quite a serenade of love, only this time its on the girls side! I liked it, a 10.

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