Sara Smith

So Long

I trusted him
But thats gone.
He ruined my life
Felt as though he cut me with a knife.
So long
My trust is withdrawn.
You can't have it back
You won't ever get another chance
Now I walk away
With a knife in my back

Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 11, 2009

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Comments about So Long by Sara Smith

  • Brooke Lynn Moore (1/11/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    I think this one may leave a little too much for the readers to figure out. It has a good theme and an apparent style of writing but it feels as though it needs to be finished.

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