So Long Poem by Sara Smith

So Long

Rating: 2.0


I trusted him
But thats gone.
He ruined my life
Felt as though he cut me with a knife.
So long
My trust is withdrawn.
You can't have it back
You won't ever get another chance
Now I walk away
With a knife in my back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brooke Lynn Moore 11 January 2009

I think this one may leave a little too much for the readers to figure out. It has a good theme and an apparent style of writing but it feels as though it needs to be finished.

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