So, She Dumped Me Poem by NENGOVHELA MURENDENI

So, She Dumped Me

Rating: 3.2


I used to believe in her
She used to trust in me
She loved me and care for me
But now I know all was empty lies.

I was happy, the day I saw her
Coming running to me
We huged each other, and kissed
A thousand of my kisses, to her I gave.

Her sweetness I enjoyed
She felt me, we make love.
I promised, She promised
To DEATH, FOREVER IT WILL BE.

TODAY, I smile a childish smile
When I saw her, SHE GAVE ME AN ACID-SMILE

I've been litted into a rubbish bin
Now i'm dancing in the ashes with no one else around.

What happened I dont know
BUT SO, SHE DUMPED ME
For an unkown reason.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

well done Mr Murendi, u r a genius.

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Catrina Heart 14 June 2009

OUCH! ! ! ! ! ! That hurts...lovely moving poem...Heart felt one! Thanks....I echo Alf suggestions...

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Carol Gall 12 June 2009

betrayal at any age hurts good poem 10

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Vanessa Hibberd 12 June 2009

You can feel the sorrow and anger in your words and the contrast between your words when comparing the childish and acid smile is amazing.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2009

love seems to be betrayed, that happens to happen at times by reeks of closeness knowing more each other....quite poignant ans passionate write..10+, thanks

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a sad ending for a beautiful story..well expressed

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