So Utterly Dumb Poem by Phoenix1 Smith

So Utterly Dumb

Rating: 5.0


I used to ask
many questions
not stopping
until I know
the real story
I begged, I wept
still the answer
was not given
to me honestly

Now I know...
I do not need
to beg, to weep
for answers...
his actuation,
expressions
has given me
the whole truth

I will no longer ask
I will no longer weep
I will just keep silent
truth hurts so much
It made me numb
believing all his lies
had made me feel
so utterly dumb...

Sunday, August 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 07 August 2017

So intense...sometimes, that negativity push you to possitivity...loved it....a good write...perfect 10 Cheryl

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Phoenix1 Smith 07 August 2017

Thank you Cheryl for the beautiful comment.. I truly appreciate it... Thank you.. :)

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Rajnish Manga 06 August 2017

Nicely portrayed. Our grasp of someone's nature may change with every new experience based on our mutual interaction. Thanks a lot for sharing the poem.

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Phoenix1 Smith 06 August 2017

Thank you so much Mr. Rajnish Manga for your insight... I appreciate it sir.. Thank you..

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