Lil Phoenix

Rookie (Phoenix, Arizona)

Soldier - Poem by Lil Phoenix

It's good to feel pain, It lets me know I'm alive.
Roll with the thunder, Know that I'll survive.
March on I'm a soldier, No matter the war.
Keep my head up I'm a soldier, I'm tough to the core.
My fear is my weakness, Let my weakness be gone.
I know I'm a soldier, I've been one all along.
We are picking our battles, Fighting our wars.
We hold the weight of the world, Our minds and bodies are sore.
But push on I'm on a soldier, The stronger of some.
A soldier of life, In an army of one.
It's good to feel pain, It lets me know I'm alive.
Take the jolt of lightning, Know that I'll survive.


Comments about Soldier by Lil Phoenix

  • (5/13/2008 3:42:00 PM)


    Great poem! ! It flows beautifully and you can feel all the emotions. It makes the reader feel how a soldier feels and appreciate what they are doing. I love it! =) (Report) Reply

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  • (4/17/2008 7:11:00 PM)


    it was good as always! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2008 11:54:00 AM)


    very good that is inspirational (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2008 11:35:00 AM)


    wow! ! ! dang...another good one hun i love it. real strong in feelings. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008



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