Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Soldier Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's good to feel pain, It lets me know I'm alive.
Roll with the thunder, Know that I'll survive.
March on I'm a soldier, No matter the war.
Keep my head up I'm a soldier, I'm tough to the core.
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Lil Phoenix
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Katherine Sessor 13 May 2008

Great poem! ! It flows beautifully and you can feel all the emotions. It makes the reader feel how a soldier feels and appreciate what they are doing. I love it! =)

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Jade Fish 17 April 2008

it was good as always! ! !

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very good that is inspirational

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wow! ! ! dang...another good one hun i love it. real strong in feelings.

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