prabhakar bhatlekar


Some - Poem by prabhakar bhatlekar

Some constantly
on move, some not.
Unmistakable
to and fro journey between
two fixed, distinct points.
The ultimate structure
to get settled.
Haunting music of
to and fro journey...
between working place
and home-sweet home!
But, for some
sky is a message and
they hurtle themselves
beyond the structure
and land on galaxy.
There they meet their
guiding star.

Topic(s) of this poem: sometimes, star


Poet's Notes about The Poem

two different kinds of mind

Comments about Some by prabhakar bhatlekar

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/5/2015 7:23:00 AM)

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    Verily, life is a journey between two fixed distinct points, either earthly or heavenly
    I invite you to read my poems
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  • Ramesh T A (9/6/2015 3:12:00 AM)

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    We have to look around to know all to be knowledgeable to overcome the monotony of work place and home only ever! Already Reported Reply

    Prabhakar Bhatlekar (9/6/2015 8:39:00 AM)

    thanx Ramesh

  • Jaishree Nair (9/5/2015 11:38:00 PM)

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    The journey of life in a nutshell. Thanks Already Reported Reply

    Prabhakar Bhatlekar (9/6/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Thanx Jaishree

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015



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