Some Girl Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Some Girl

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Not some girl

I feel let down
When you write down
“Some girl”
And then it is my turn

To speak
In real terms and feel weak
That you are so special
Honest and jovial

I treasure in heart
As golden piece of an art
That you were not an ordinary
But as life itself and necessary

What would have been our fate?
If we were together very late
Not a note would have been taken by world
But would have spread as mere word

I was not happy either
But decisions still bothered
I smiled at the outcome
It was all for good and welcome

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I feel let down When you write down

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Swapan RakshitLess than a minute ago fine

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Jim HarmonLess than a minute ago I feel when I read it....several times, that there are some words missing that would help the reader understand what you are saying. Perhaps just an english thing for me. But I liked the acceptance. Comment +1 something special

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gr8 Shreyas SusanLess than a minute ago i love this poem Comment +1 Expressive

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Good poem DD Pringles3 minutes ago Sweet

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sasreeany nice poem

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sasreeany nice poem

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DEVKISHAN MEH.. I was not happy either But decisions still bothered I smiled at the outcome It was all for good and welcome

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madhuri kulka.. opinions and perceptions differ...

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atlantida..- Same Girl~ I do agree the expression that we use to keep up an conversation at the basic levo, and with the few words that we may speech, we can comperhed! ! ! ..same of us only understand

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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