Some Say Poem by Maria Mitea

Some Say

Rating: 5.0


the universe
it is
a superb creation
perfect
elegance
majestic

while
in its random reality
one thing is certain:
- it is the worst construction
constructed
ever, who believes
doesn't know-
many constants
of arbitrary coupling
mass ratios
families
and families, and families of useless particles
& dark matter, - chewing gum on a stick

gross fact

the universe exists

pregnant abyss
established chain
a fire that breathes equations
while the truth is looking for its head and tail

certainly

by wandering the mind
hallucinating
it cannot be canceled

- the crime of thoughts
it is not its death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 January 2022

I know you still do find the universe majestic and elegant despite the criticism on points. Kudos for the poem esp the first stanza. Plz do read and comment on my newsest poem too titled, 'The ravishing rain'

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David Wood 05 January 2022

I read somewhere that there are around two trillion galaxies in the known universe. How many we don't know about

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