Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Somedays! Comments

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somedays i still feel
like i can fly!
like plowing the earth,
and planting the seeds...
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Eric Cockrell
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Jay Mandeville 19 May 2012

Great flow from one described activity to the next...I can follow along with you on a psychological journey that resembles a rite of passage. The final line brings the traveller into a state of reflection and meditation after the wildness that came before.

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