Friday, July 31, 2015

Someone Else's Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I look through the eyes of an elder,
I see a world I don't understand.
With to many changes far beyond their years,
they see the world has a different plan.
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David Wirth
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Chinedu Dike 07 August 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Indeed one's perception of life depends on one's world outlook. Point of view depends on perspective. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing David and do remain blessed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 31 July 2015

an interesting and well penned poem, David. Welcome at PoemHunter and keep on writing! Thanks for sharing

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