Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Something About The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.5

The clouds guide the tide,
as a lighthouse protects its rocky shore,
As if the sea is to hold its breath,
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Paige Thomas
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Ann Beard 12 December 2007

A Lovely Poem. and you are so young. I am impressed and hope you continue to write.

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Ricky Owen 12 December 2007

Brilliant write, enjoyed it :) take care Ricky

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Effie Yalena Steyn 12 December 2007

This is stunning, absolute genius. Brings a tear to my eyes as it reminds me of Durban, and all my days spent fighting the waves with a surfboard. I have had so many beautiful times by the sea, nice to see it summed up into a poem. Effie. xxxx

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Paige Thomas

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Canaan, Maine
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