Something Improper Poem by Genevieve Surrender

Something Improper

Rating: 4.5


For a woman like me
it is improper
to act such things.

But it is only acceptable
when I do so
through poetry.

So now
my hand is in your pants
in the back of number 18
in the easton theater.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucy Burrow 06 November 2005

How true! I really like this poem. excellent idea and well said! Regards, Lucy

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***** ********* 06 November 2005

Sounds like Jail bait to me Callisto! lol 8 for imagination. Grinning Tai

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Jessica H 06 November 2005

I like how you can express it at least through poetry you're right though saying this in everyday conversation would just freak everyone out. I like it

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Erica Francis 10 November 2005

Tai, your appology is accepted. I hope you accept mine for whatever I have done to offend you.

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***** ********* 09 November 2005

You are right callisto. I apologise. I have removed the offending rant! I allowed my emotions to get the better of me. Your poem is insightful. Hope that is ok? Tai

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Erica Francis 07 November 2005

I feel very insulted by your comments, Tai. I don't know if you mean it that way, but I mean it this way: if you're malicious with your words, don't leave them here. They're unappreciated.

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Erica Francis 06 November 2005

Dear Tai, I only have a day over months until I am no longer jailbait. Thank you for your concern though.

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Indiscreet Episode 06 November 2005

Wow. I haven't found the seats at the Easton 18 to be all that accommodating, the arm rests seem a bit bulky for such adventures.

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