Something Special. Poem by Fay Slimm

Something Special.

Rating: 4.3


Whever we find something of value
We tend to secrete it, cosset with care,
And regard it with awe, which is the more
Ear-marked the nearer it is to the rare.

Rare indeed are exceptional treasures.
Distinctive things deserve being hoarded
With miserly pride, taken out at times
Then sighed over, quietly, whilst adored.

Adored as uniquely uncommon, claimed
With inordinate joy, something to cherish.
Deeply held needs are explicitly filled
By a trophy we know will never perish.

Perish away with decline, nor will vanish
Wthout any trace, so we handle deftly
This admirable bounty, put out of sight
But not out of mind and thought of as best.

Best of all special things, friendship, when found
Seems worth the wonder at such a rich prize.
Blessings of friendship and as close as ours,
Means it will ever be special, in my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 04 December 2009

Really enjoyed this one Fay. Your words always crafted so carefully and formed in excellence.

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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, I believe that we all feels friendships are something to be treasured and held close so they are never lost. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 20 November 2009

A really lovely poem on friendship on ly spoiled by some idiot marking it down well you got 10 from me Daniel

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Carol Gall 20 November 2009

fay so beautiful friendships are angels without wings 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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