Sometime Poem by Ashmita Kamlesh

Sometime



sometimes i wish you were here with me
sometimes i was there with you
sometimes i wish that were not apart
sometimes i wish that we have a friendship that will not end
sometimes i wish we could see each other more often
sometimes i wish we could go back to the old memories
sometimes i wish for a lot of memories to come again
sometimes i wish that we all could meet at the same place were we again where we begin
sometimes i wish the world could stay the same

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Afzal Shauq 05 December 2009

Sometime i wish we could go back to the old memories sometime i wish for a lot of memories to come again sometime i wish that we all could meet at the same place were we again sometime i wish the world could stay the same a great and heart touching job...expression is done in a very poeitic and sweet repeated way..and the idea is again good and poem is professionally written..appreciate your way of writing...10/10

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a a 29 November 2009

Simple yet straight to the point, god i felt pain just reading it. =, [.

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