Somewhere A Window Opens Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Somewhere A Window Opens

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Like the grains in an hourglass,
memories slip through into a forgotten pool.
No remnant of joy perceived, or retained.
The grains, once on an endless beach
thrashed by oceans unceasing torment,
still warm underfoot from lovers walking
gentle steps within each others footprints.
At the lapping waters edge,
green weeds tangle, eating through the purity
Changing the crystal blue to lurid verdant.
Hiding the beauty that was from the obscurity that remains.
Deserted headland, promontory seeking inclusion.
Ever enveloped by the encroaching tide..
Worn away slowly, like love untended
Yet uncompromising and
seeking a lighthouse beacon
to focus on.
Cliffs, edging paradise yet, on a precipice
awaiting the inevitable and
crashing into a devouring sea..
Life and love becomes driftwood,
sailing away, out of sight..
But in the darkness approaching,
as hope and love become confounded,
forgotten, misremembered..
Still on a clifftop, a solitary structure remains
tettering, uncertain, condemned,
Slowly, with trembling hands and a hopeful heart,
a sanguine soul, ravenous to recapture enchantment,
opens a window to lookout, with ever trusting eyes
seeking a new horizon,
far, far beyond memory…

Somewhere A Window Opens
Sunday, April 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten love,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 April 2018

Life and love becomes driftwood, sailing away, out of sight.. But in the darkness approaching, as hope and love become confounded, forgotten, misremembered.. Still on a clifftop, a solitary structure remains tettering, uncertain, condemned, Slowly, with trembling hands and a hopeful heart, a sanguine soul, ravenous to recapture enchantment, .......haunting expression with nice theme. Beautifully inscribed poem shared nicely. Thanks for sharing dear Lodigiana.

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 April 2018

Dear Kumarmani, your comments are so very much appreciated. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it- Thank you. Lodigiana x

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Chris Embrick 17 April 2018

A very beautifully crafted free verse. You certainly have a talent for expressing words in a way that captivates the mind. Thanks Lodigiana. And congrats on recently being on the poets of the day list. A well deserved accomplishment.

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 April 2018

So pleased you liked it Chris and thank you so much for the congrats..The Poet of the Day though is a bit of a dual edged sword as I found it attracted some not very nice comments not just towards me but towards other people who had been kind enough to comment ..but hey ho I guess thats a sign of the times we live in. Thank you once again my friend! Lodigiana x

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