Jade Blaydes

Rookie - 54 Points (Jan 9,1997 / Butte Falls, OR)

Somtheing New - Poem by Jade Blaydes

Going to do something new
Despite all of things I've been through
Turning a new leafe
Disregaurding my beliefes
Waiting for the one
That will make life more fun
Wait for those arms of his
To get wrapped in and feel his kiss
The air we breath to be shared
For our Love once more to be declared
That one piece that will make me whole
Waiting to try not to loose control
Then seeing him and the rush I feel
Just knowing that what I'm feeling is real
But too scared to get hurt, that I start pulling away
You keep asking me over and over if I'm okay
I can't lie to you anymore
My heart gets so heavy that it hits the floor
I love you but I don't know
I want to learn to let you go
For my heart needs to be kept in one piece
Not wanting our time to decrease
But seeing you is more than a crush
Setting my mind to rest with a hush
If my heart gets broken in the taking
There is only hope to be beauty in the braking

Comments about Somtheing New by Jade Blaydes

  • Sharad Juneja (4/23/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    complete expression of feelings ...keep up the nice work (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 11:10:00 AM)

    You really can express your emotion very well..it really good believe me but one thing is be careful, there's some typo and spelling errors, maybe you rushing typing it and the mistakes just there...but never mind that never mean your poem not beautiful..it is beautiful.. keep on writing, you done it very well :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (4/18/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    that is really good! (just need 2 work on ur spelling a bit: }) you know what? hows about i help you out with your spelling and stuff? (Report) Reply

  • Angelica Huntoon (4/11/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    nic3e3 poem i rly like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 10, 2012

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