Beautiful Imperfection Poem by Jade Blaydes

Beautiful Imperfection



Your lips make up for your crooked eye,
Your touch so sweet, I'm not going to lie.
The connection right there, did you feel it?
Lets make a deal and a kiss to seal it.
It doesnt matter what we did in our past.
All we've got is time, so lets not move to fast.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guillermo Veloso 27 April 2012

read many of your other offerings...LUV this tight/powerful/plenty of roaming room for the mind! ! ! ! think this is beautiful [path

0 0 Reply
David Gerardino 10 April 2012

very good, i see guiter chords in this poem.......

0 0 Reply
Connor Whyte 28 March 2012

Again with your power of words you can shake mountains. Keep it up and you will show the world a teenagers perspective. Not many adults see like we see we are more vulnerable and with these words you fit the test. As in test I mean you can make a life lesson you seem what it takes to be a leader you have good words. Short and straight to the point Beautiful work!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success