Song Of A Thousand Words Poem by Cody A. Buckmaster

Song Of A Thousand Words



Into the ocean,
End it all.
All the promises you made us,
Shatter into thin air.
Sufficating,
Makes you think.
Pulling my eyes out slowly,
So you can see through them.
Close your dark eyes,
Im letting life slip away.
im already dead on the inside,
But I can pretend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emerald Eyes 16 February 2010

'Im already dead on the inside But i can pretend ' Really great poem i can see how it resembles how many people have endured a pain so much more than meets the eye.. it makes me want to open my eyes a bit more and look beyond a smile, beyond the stupid jokes and lies/broken promises.. and actually think about why this is.. and will there ever be an end to their torment against us p.s sorry if im making no sense.. 10+

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