Thursday, January 1, 2004

Song Of The Foot Track Comments

Rating: 3.3

COME away, come away from the straightness of the road;
I will lead you into delicate recesses
Where peals of ripples ring through the maidenhair’s abode
In the heart of little water wildernesses.
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Elsie Cole
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Cassandra Jasmine 19 August 2014

I should SERIOUSLY get onto Poem Hunter more often... I mean look at the poems I have been missing! This poem was awesome, I loved it a bunch. :)

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beautiful makes me want to take a very long walk in the woods mostly to find solitude very well written..a ten from me..looking forward to more of your wonderful poetry...

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 19 August 2014

Beautiful imaginations and awesome poem.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 19 August 2012

For the secret of my lure is the call of the Unknown, Hidden Loveliness that laughs: ‘Come and find me! ’ Wide range of colorful imagery yet the mystery resides within the whole writing. Poet calls to give up straightness yet she herself ends her own journey. Mystery and mystic beauty blended with possibility of confusion........................................................Pranab k c

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