Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Song Of The Scythe (For Lyn) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My uncle
sits cross-legged

the shiny sickle
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Dónall Dempsey
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Dee Dee Wright 29 February 2008

Wow...wonderful story and storytelling! So sharp it can cut thought. Great line and a good description of what you do here. That scythe and that uncle have now made a third appeareance...when you settle on something you really circle it and keep writing it until you get it just right. I think this is just...so right! love and envy Dee Dee4

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Scarlett Treat 27 February 2008

I feel as if I have just walked into a Van Gogh Painting, The Potato Eaters, or some such rural print. This is a wonderful image painting from first word to last. Thank you, my Ever So Dear Friend...LYN

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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