Song of the Three Swallows Poem by Holly Karapetkova

Song of the Three Swallows

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The leaves are no longer talking.
The pines are fighting with swords,
the oaks are fighting with fists.
The black birds are coming, black as ravens,
they will smother the sun from our sight.
Some say it is a heard of sheep,
some say it is goats for the slaughter,
but it is not sheep, nor goats.
It is the standing army coming, steady
as the black hand of the sea.

Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

Beautiful train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem elegantly encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Holly. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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