What was she to do when you went away?
Sit on her bed and just sing?
Nothing but you was on her mind every day
everytime she looked on her finger that had no ring.
She gave you her heart
and you pushed it around
She should have known better right from the start.
you took her heart and slamed it on the ground.
You throw away every thing that she made
you never did this before
how could you make someone lay where she laid?
she gave you her all, why didn't you just love her more?
she thought that you and her was sweet
but you had to walk out and leave her incomplete.
This poem was HOTT, i loved this poem especially, i guess because I went through a similar experience, i mean i wasn't laid in no1's bed and we wasn't engages but the experience was just like how you described them in your poem. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So far this is the best one you have wrote. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. Always remember Jesus loves you and God does to. Also God answers prayers.