Sonnet-Electrons Poem by Christina Shen

Sonnet-Electrons



We are the true shadows invincible,
Winding, wandering since the dawn of time.
Only law of entropy is able
To chain our free souls and make us begrime.
Those fractal traces in a cloud chamber,
Could not sketch the glam and spry of our dance.
Even works of the wiliest crafter,
Become dull under our shine the first glance.
Yet, as we have no brains to contemplate
Would you tell us, with your frail mortal mind-
That what's in the probability haze-
T'was Omnibenevolent, or maligned?
Although our field is thus magnificent,
Thou wilt answer, with the wise immanent.

Saturday, October 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: elements,philosophical,sonnet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 October 2016

Good train of thought, nicely brought forth in Shakespearean rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Christina. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 October 2016

not bad.. not bad.. :) A nice read, really. Thanks for sharing and Keep on writing, Christina

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