Saturday, October 22, 2011

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What shall I say, of my beloved's eyes,
That sparkle when she smiles.
Reflections of sweet butterflies,
As innocent as any child's.
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Juan Olivarez
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Claudia Krizay 23 October 2011

Very, very beautiful- I especially like the line 'Windows of the soul, is what they are'- A lovely way to think of eyes! Well done- at 10 Claudia

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