Sorry Poem by Kimberly Candace

Sorry

Rating: 3.0


I'm sorry that you can't
do this alone,
but then I always knew
you could never hold
your own.
I'm no better,
we're both the same.
The only difference
now is
I'm making a change.
You tried to do this once.
You tried way before me.
But I didn't want to,
so you chose to follow me.
Why you put me first
I never will see,
I'll never understand why
I was all you could see.
To me it was clear
that I didn't love you.
Everyone else noticed
why couldn't you?
And now I'm gone
and your still there,
I'm trying to let go...
you won't dare.
You think I can save
you. Why?
I never tried before, the
only thing you ever heard
from me was
'Can I have some more? '.
I'm sorry I couldn't
help you,
I'm sorry you feel alone.
I'm sorry that you
couldn't see
That I couldn't hold
my own.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 09 October 2008

.............a well thought out word picture Kim (it's my daughters name too) , and I'd like to see more. Cheers, Jerry

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