Sorry Poem by shannon eason

Sorry

Rating: 5.0


I'm sorry for not
Being the person you
Wanted me to be all
This time but that's
Who I am. Sorry
For caring to much
When a shoulder was
Needed when you cried.
Sorry for loving you
When you were in pain
For things or thinking
Of the past instead of
The now. Sorry for trying
To be the one that saw
Something in you when
Everybody else gave up.
Sorry for hoping to be
The girl that you could trust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 04 July 2011

I can hear a sincere lines come out from you heart, it was a great heart to ask sorry and being good person :) this was good and hope you keep writing coz i know u have more to share with 'poem hunters' here_Unwritten SOul

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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