*******sorry********* Poem by christane darling

*******sorry*********

Rating: 2.8


i know it makes you mad, when im being bad well just be happy that im not a brat
i know i do things wrong and im ashamed that dosent mean play the hate game
i know i do right i know i do wrong but all i can say is i need your help along
i know ive done wrong and i know i will alli need you to say is well
i know i do things that i shouldnt and that im all to blame all i can say is please dont hate
i know i say sorry its proble the same as me having no game
i know you love me and you always will but all i can say is why dose it fell like im being killed

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i get in alot of trouble being around the wrong people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K .w 31 October 2011

I like it! (: I dont know why you would say its bad

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Indranil Bhaduri 12 September 2012

Starting with a rebel mind and going soft towards the end..Loved it! !

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Francy Lowachee 11 January 2012

u r an awesome poet: D

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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[But don't say worthless sorry or thanks] I like this poem! ! !

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Robert Roberts 20 November 2011

nice writing bit rough but you're on the right track keep it up

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A Lifetime Of Fame 02 November 2011

Very nice! I knew you could do it!

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