Spare The Rod O Advice!
He stole a thousand rupees one day,
Just at nine and hid in bay,
His father who was soon warned,
Saved the rod to void no storm
The only words he said In vein;
Was is my son alright?
Ah! But tis the father to blame
For he had a light to stop the strain!
He grew up now stealing a game!
Lying, deceit all a gain,
Tis but a waste for he did frown,
And pondered upon the circus clown.
Ay! Tis but a fools shame
Never will he learn the pain,
OF another man’s drain of fortune’s loss
Nai! Nai! He’s not to blame, ,
For he was just a part of the game
Copy rights: Teacher Shanika Paul
Grad ALLI U/graduate BA English(OUSL) , ADIE(UK) , ACIE(OUSL) , DIP; AMI/PSY(CAMBRIDGE) Trained Teacher(IMSD)
i do not applaud physical or mental punishment but for parents to guide their young ones through example.I am a mother and teacher
Wonderful advice to every single parent, who would want bring up the child not waning to go off the track. Nicely worded and rhymed too. Thank you Shanika for the inspiring poem.
Thank you poet jayatissa fr your comment please read my other poem when free
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly, '.. He was just a part of the game.' If only parents, especially ours, can heed your words of wisdom. Shanika thanks for sharing your invaluable thoughts.