Sparrow Comments

Loved the picturesque quality.Your power of imagination is very strong.

The image of that beautiful girl on skates is carved in your heart and it keeps enticing you! Let that sparrow perch for ever in your heart's nest and never fly away! ! ! !

Borrowing words from poet Lento Maez, may I say, Keep on keeping on'', that means: Keep on imagining and savoring the sweet memory. The title does not appropriately cover the theme or narration of the poem. However, the poem is beautiful and I gave it a 10.