Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Speaking Of Work. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nothing is still, and we need to keep pace
With seasonal race, as earth itself works.

Life's march is relentless, submission wise,
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Fay Slimm
COMMENTS
Kevin Wells 31 October 2008

So many wonderful comments about your writing, I find difficulty in commenting in an original way! Only that I agree with what everyone else has said!

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Ian Bowen 30 October 2008

Fay, found this to be a first class write. Wonderful in content, and a joy to read.10/10 Ian

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2008

Hear! Hear! Well done indeed. A really superb piece of writing. Excellent contents. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Lynda Robson 28 October 2008

Another great piece of writing from you Fay and of course you are so right, thanks for this, 10 Lynda xx

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Tia Maria 28 October 2008

What an inspiration you are dear Fay To love your work is the only way For just today I considered much of this As I gave thanks for my accomplishments

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Billy Joe Collins 28 October 2008

hard work gives you pride and pride makes you feel better about yourself great poem thanks for sharing

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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