Special Treatment Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Special Treatment

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Mother gave me special treatment
Whole of childhood was an enjoyment
She made real difference
In life with her presence

Every child misses her honestly
Even in young age, he misses badly
How can he have double thought about love?
When he has reared with thoughts to believe

Where is chance to find any flaws?
When life simply offer pose
With no hurdle or struggle
It is nice and simple

So long parent are alive
He has all charms to live
No fresh worries to share and feel
Everything is at free will

Life is full of joy
With all means to enjoy
The marriage proposal makes life beautiful
Golden dreams rush and make him cheerful

Rest of the life may move as usual
With addition or deletion on arrival
Happiness shall be at the center
When sadness may not be allowed to enter

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Mother gave me special treatment Whole of childhood was an enjoyment

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welcome Maricela Ramírez, 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Kalpana Shah likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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To make a difference with one's presence A Bel10 minutes ago That is really something, and a gift that not many have- to make a difference with one 's presence. Comment +1

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it's well written John Child9 minutes ago Happiness is all around, sometimes just get blinded Comment +1

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Uhm Briana Lego12 minutes ago It's hard to see where you are going with this poem, it seemed like it started off sad than became happy. I was sort of confused the way you worded a lot of your sentences were also confusing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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