Spiders Within Poem by Scarlet .....

Spiders Within

Rating: 4.5


feel the sting within my skin
my insides no longer numb
the sting has started to ring
like painful spiders crawling within
webs of pain spun within
just feel the constant ring
the never ending sting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 16 September 2009

You used spiders to express great pain felt within so well in this wonderful poem. I love how you weaved a web of feelings throughtout this poem.

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