Tuesday, December 20, 2005

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Rating: 3.5

Last night I had a funny dream,
it seemed I'd lost my self-esteem.
Among the bottles in the shop
I stood and heard a noisy pop.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 03 March 2006

Ha ha ha! ! Quirky little comedy. To you, Herbs. Fondly, Gina.

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Ernestine Northover 21 December 2005

A wonderful read Herbert, I couldn't take the smile off my face. You have a great way of explaining things, that are so unusual, shall we say! Thanks. love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Osborne 20 December 2005

The rhyme and meter, story and words are just perfect in this Herbert, it reads as easily as Dom goes down... excellent my Aussie friend! And also... Great story Allan.. :)

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