Split Poem by Luke Booth

Split

Rating: 5.0


I am the half which you would see drown
We wish to dance
however our mind cannot connect
the walls surrounding frown
the floor weeps.

You tread over my corpse
and I yours forever enveloped
we cannot speak.
We cannot sing, we cannot dance
No union to be found

I am the half which you would see drown
not out of hate
not out of pleasure
but from guilt and shame.
The marsh we wade through
never gets thinner.

Majestic, your elegance
Captivating, your beauty
"why wont you accept me
is it too much
too little"
No answer to be found

Sunday, December 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: disorder,psychological
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

Very heartfelt. Deep feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. Passionate sad story impressively narrated. Thanks for sharing Luke.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2017

Beautifully crafted write. It expresses in detail the feelings of a.person with disorder.

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Luke Booth 11 December 2017

Thank you, im very new to this so im glad you think its written beautifully.

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