Spring Poem by Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

Spring

Rating: 2.6


the birds flying high in the sky
the new born rabbits asleep by mothers side
the flowers blooming so pretty
the red the blues purple and white
spring is the start of something new


[ still working on this one]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 12 July 2010

Good work here Shelby.Just needs a little more detail. God bless Juan.

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