Jackie Thielman

Rookie - 7 Points (U.S.A.)

Spring And Rain Dancing Together - Poem by Jackie Thielman

Spring has sprung
As I hear the pitter patters of rain
And the aroma of my lovely roses

As I stand out side
The wet cold rain taps my head
Then I do the rain dance
To the powerful almighty rain

I stay out side
And pick a blossom
For I love spring
It is awesome

As the day comes to an end
I stay outside to send
A message that
“I love spring” Poem Writer,
By: Jackie Thielman

Comments about Spring And Rain Dancing Together by Jackie Thielman

  • (5/3/2009 11:06:00 AM)

    The spring rain feels fifferent to different people in different mood. I was observing rain fall on roses and wrote a poem on spring rain. I have little pessimistic outlook. I love your joy in the poem. Good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, March 16, 2009

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