Spring Day Poem by Victoria Black

Spring Day

Rating: 5.0


*this is a memorie from when i was a young girl in kindergaurden when theworld seemed to be right and i didnt understand half the things going on*

I look outside at the nice spring day,
I remeber how i used to go out and play,
The green grass in my fingers and hair,
The bumble-bees everywhere,
I used to look up at the crystal clear sky,
The birds would fly high up above,
The clouds would float like lifeless thoughts,
I could smell the BBQ's,
And i wish i knew,
The butterflys would land on my arm,
They wished me fare-well as i moved on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Johnson 11 April 2008

Nice use of words to produce vivid immagry, Made me want a pulled 'pork sandwich'

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