Star And Fish Poem by Nayyar Afaq

Star And Fish

Rating: 5.0


Star looked from sky at fish on beach.
Light fell on sand, and made a screech,
“A cruel wave has signed her dead.
Why did she leave a safe sea bed?
There’s life in sea, and death on shore.
May all my li'l friends learn it more.”

The moment, when star had this wish,
A big fish killed another fish.
But since that happened miles deep,
Who cared to watch, who cared to weep?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 14 July 2011

great poem, have deep meaning inside him.....well done

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Nayyar Afaq

Nayyar Afaq

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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