Star And Fish Poem by Nayyar Afaq

Star And Fish

Rating: 5.0


Star looked from sky at fish on beach.
Light fell on sand, and made a screech,
“A cruel wave has signed her dead.
Why did she leave a safe sea bed?
There’s life in sea, and death on shore.
May all my li'l friends learn it more.”

The moment, when star had this wish,
A big fish killed another fish.
But since that happened miles deep,
Who cared to watch, who cared to weep?

Tuesday, July 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,fish,sea,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 14 July 2011

great poem, have deep meaning inside him.....well done

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Nayyar Afaq

Nayyar Afaq

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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