J Knight

Rookie (9/25/90-Yesterday / Watertown, N.Y.)

Star Feelings (Prose) (Part Two) - Poem by J Knight

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At dawn, in the crying mornings of America, when people rise with the sun, off to their tragic lives, the paranoid red sun jumped into the palms of my hands and I held it there feeling the warmth in the mysteries of my flesh, the mysteries of my heart (the mystery of love) , and I held it there all day until I knew I had to give it up, and I threw it into the west and when all that color and light faded, I drew your picture with the stars and you were glistening magnificently in all that darkness; you’re the visible twinkle of star hope, and you twinkle in my heart all day, through light and darkness, you shine, star.
You’re a mystery baby and you knew I was crying with my head in the palms of my hands/ baby, you’re off there faded in the red mornings of a paranoid day/ sun mystery of lives, heart mystery visible out west and at dawn, you smile star lovely/ mysterious sun over America/ glistening I jumped out west and then your became the sun- that color of love/ “I got star feelings for you. You light the dawn I live under, so I need you to rise the day, my west sun”/ you’re all heart, the mysteries of stars, broken heart dawn/ love/ the Universe threw us together and knew you are hope/ America, all with your color over darkness/ mornings knew it, and made our hearts visible baby, color/ I held you up there, my crying blue eyes/ my light stars shine with paranoid light/ I need you to shine heart... all day until I jumped out west and I knew you were hope/ “I got star hope, and I held a smile and star feelings for you. You raise the red mornings in the east, and when the darkness falls, you become a star of the night”/ you’re the red sun, and when you fell... I was crying/ give me your feeling of stars shine heart with your picture on the red sun mystery of lives/ you’re the heart twinkle baby, and you are red Universe and we’re off crying hearts of America, and I need to see your crayon eyes glow and taste your candy apple red lips/ you were the color until you faded and fell off sun/ out west and you held my heart/ I said: “I’m in love with you... let your light shine over naked life”/ if I had one wish... I would wish for you/
“You’re the Universe baby and I need you...”

“So tonight when I went out for a cigarette, a saw the picture I drew of you in stars glowing up the darkness... do you love me now, Goddess? ”


Comments about Star Feelings (Prose) (Part Two) by J Knight

  • (9/8/2009 5:17:00 PM)


    i love it. i read it and reread it outloud because i couldn't get enough of it; you're gifted and i'm glad to see all this beauty in you after everything. this is how i know you won't give up, this is how i know you're a fighter. i love it, and i love you. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/2/2009 12:09:00 AM)


    Yo Knight Rider....(you can now take over David Hasselhoff...even for the Bay Watch serials) .
    So I was saying.....easy on the prose...it does seem like a heavy dose...! !
    But....keep writing....p...oems....more.....
    Cheers.
    Subroto
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 30, 2009


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