Sunday, August 30, 2015

Starlight Comments

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Bright Star
Lone splendour hung
Loves sleepless eremite
Gazing down upon this poor Earth
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David Wood
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

John Keats still lives through your poem. It is beautiful.

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

A wonderful poem, David. My one suggestion would be to change the second occurrence of the word bright to brilliant, or some other adjective

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David Wood 31 August 2015

Hi Kelly, I changed second line as per request.

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