Monday, December 10, 2007

Stars And Starry Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hubble, bubble, distant stars
looking into darkness ohh so far.
Because that light takes time to travel
into cosmic history it dimly sees
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David Taylor
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Danny Reynolds 10 December 2007

Makes you wonder, if all that we see, and all that we don't, have vanished already or not yet been born. (Not just stars either David, eh?)

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Sonny Rainshine 10 December 2007

Finely crafted and beautiful poem, David. I like the way it starts with the play on 'twinkle, twinkle, little star' becoming hubble bubble. And indeed the Hubble telescope does look sort of like a giant bubble. Inventive use of rhyme too. There's probably nothing that makes us all seem so small and the universe so immense as looking up at the stars at night. Good work. -Bill

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