Stars (Synai) Poem by Javier Falcon

Stars (Synai)



The sky is full of beautiful stars,
all so gorgeous and unique,
as life is full of beautiful girls.

Me being a lonely star,
lost hope in finding someone to love,
yet I kept looking out into space.

So many came by to me,
yet none were able to feel my emptiness,
as if my black hole was waiting for someone special.

While I looked from afar,
you were the only one which called to me,
with that splendid shine and radiance.

Brightening me in my darkness,
giving me hope once again in life,
showing me that there is someone out there.

My feelings started to move toward you,
I definitely knew I had fallen for you,
wanting you to be by my side.

As I want to pull you toward me,
into my orbit of existence,
to love and hold ad infinitum.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
May Namoc 18 July 2008

i love this poem! soo powerful and passionate and umm, yeah all that cool jazz. you are an amazing writer. dont ever forget that.=)

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That last stanza is the strongest... very good in detail, im picturing a galaxy of stars, and one lost star waiting to be found and loved... very good write.. x3, millie

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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