Louis Borgo

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Static - Poem by Louis Borgo

Holder of a candle stand at night,
Steps we can take make things all right,

Guess question have meaning I guess,
How far out can one see is what one can guess.

Is it static in vision more over and over,
Or is it clearest of day of perception.

If light channel and tunnel spot carriers,
The stop of a freight train surely stop to get all a board?

For every light there is a worker and if so for every bulb,
They are place holders what seem to be out of place?


Is it static in vision more over and over,
Or is it clearest of day of perception.

To make a guess is like a box set who knows
However the scenery of the straight and narrow holds truth.

Topic(s) of this poem: educational, history, nightfall, understanding

Form: Couplet


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Is this couplet a 'Heptatonic' scale I did take some music class in high school. Teachers and Mentors the impression the leave.

Comments about Static by Louis Borgo

  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/27/2016 9:43:00 AM)


    Meaningful ink. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 27, 2016


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