Sunday, November 29, 2009

Staying Alive Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bare now, bodies brown and skin-thin,
Limbs outspread, shaking in the cold,
Arms flung awry, trees sigh within,
And nakedly stand, looking old.
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Fay Slimm
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Meggie Gultiano 01 December 2009

This is poetry at its best.Wonderful words

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Carl Harris 30 November 2009

This is a most beautifully expressed poem, Fay, subtly comparing trees with we human beings. Your fine words were so expressive in this most delightful write and revealed a very astute observation on your part as one the truly great poets on this site. Carl.

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intricately designed... like the trees was this poem.

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Daniel Kempson 29 November 2009

Lovely Fay really enjoyed this, your nature poetry at its best 10

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Carol Gall 29 November 2009

excellent comparison well written 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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