Friday, August 21, 2015

Steel Outline (2nd Rev) Comments

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Friday, I should’ve escaped in the wisdom
of Proverbs & Pratchett’s Thief of Time as
every beautiful hour unfolds petal for petal
and the rose of time grows until the flower
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Margaret Alice Second
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2015

my eyes keep searching for pink and silver glitter to mark every moment in delicate glimmer, but only find a bleak steel-frame outline of life -.....deeply envisioned. An intensive poem having marvellous collocation and metaphor beautifully presented. Thanks for posting. ....10

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