I skipped a stone across the water
Into the setting sun
Watched interlocking ripples
Each and every one
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A most interesting poem and perhaps a metaphor for some. I like the way you wrote it, regardless of meaning. Which I would prefer be more direct and precise. But that's a preference among poets that I can accept. Very nice indeed. GW62
A very interesting write that I enjoyed much...excellent job! !