Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Sticks And Stones Comments

Rating: 4.6

I skipped a stone across the water
Into the setting sun
Watched interlocking ripples
Each and every one
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Tim Johnson
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Edwin Robinette 02 April 2008

A very interesting write that I enjoyed much...excellent job! !

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Sylvi Sylva 01 April 2008

wow, this is a very nice and inspiring read. loved it so!

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2008

A most interesting poem and perhaps a metaphor for some. I like the way you wrote it, regardless of meaning. Which I would prefer be more direct and precise. But that's a preference among poets that I can accept. Very nice indeed. GW62

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