Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Still Alive Comments

Rating: 4.5

The feeling of not belonging surrounds me
this eats me slowly, inside and out

Why do people have to be so rough?
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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2015

Quite a touching piece, well articulated and insightfully penned from the heart. I think that it takes courage to be ME and ignore people's perception of you. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 30 June 2015

I like your beautiful from the heart.So touching

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2015

Most people are too wrapped up in themselves to care about anyone else Thanks for sharing, Hurma. Peace

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Omar Imran 30 June 2015

Love it.

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